NOWADAYS FAMILIES MOVE TO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES FOR WORK. SOME PEOPLE THINK IT HAS A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON CHILDREN, WHILE OTHERS DISAGREE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
Today's era is of cut-throat competition. Everywhere around the globe there is a high demand for skilled people to achieve the goal of an organisation. To secure thier future and to live luxury life people now a days tend to move to developed country. Some people argue that this has an ill effect on psychology of children, and other think the opposite of the same. In my opinion positive impact on the mind of children outweigh the negative one.
Moving to different countries undoubtedly has many advantages, to begin with, children can expose to different culture and tradition, which can improve their mental horizon and expands their thinking ability. Children are of impressionable age so they adapt thing very quickly, so they will grasp the language and rituals in no time. All these have indirect benefit in their whole development and their professional career as well.
Secondly, in such countries parents are quite busy in their work, so children have to learn at very tender age their basic necessary activity, which makes them more responsible and mature early. To illustrate, they learn to make food, they wash their clothes, they do their homework on their own. All these points ultimately conclude that they become self-reliant at very young age, and this maturity help them in future as well.
There are some short-sighted people argue that immigrate to different country has a negative impact on mind of the children, and in their argument, they say that abroad the family leaves alone so children don't get the love and warmth of their family. Secondly, children may fall with the wrong company , and which ultimately may spoil the future of child.
To Sumup, i would strongly assert that there are ample benefits on mind of children when they move to different country, and it helps in overall growth of children.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-20 | Android | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-29 | bhavesh7890 | 84 | view |
| 2018-08-11 | kalpan.vaghela | 73 | view |
| 2018-06-27 | johnmathewg | 73 | view |
| 2018-06-19 | Mehdi.Babaie | 71 | view |
- You want to work in another country. write a letter to your friend live in that country. tell him you want to get a job. give your details, ask for additional information. 56
- You have spare room in in your flat or an apartment and you want to rent it to a student. write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter;-explain where your apartment is-describe the room-what kind of perso 84
- You recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store. However, you are not pleased with the service which you received.Write a letter to the store manager.In the letter,-Describe the situation.-Explain why you are dissatisfied-Say what you want 73
- Many People believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals & society to what extent do you agree? 78
- Employer s should focus in personal qualities over qualification experience when choosing someone for a job To what extent do you agree this 51
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...r future and to live luxury life people now a days tend to move to developed country. Some...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ture and to live luxury life people now a days tend to move to developed country. Some...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oad the family leaves alone so children dont get the love and warmth of their family...
^^^^
Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...children may fall with the wrong company , and which ultimately may spoil the futu...
^^
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y spoil the future of child. To Sumup, i would strongly assert that there are am...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98371335505 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58048876118 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8774118737 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207105652484 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722885130477 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659463693207 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123492627012 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584586043705 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.