Write a letter to your English-speaking friend telling him/her about a local event that is to
take place in your town, which would be useful to her/him. In your letter
- Mention the event
- What are the activities involved
- Mention the arrangements you would make for his/her stay
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in reference to inform you about a local event which is going to take place next month in my hometown "Ladakh". Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate it is a cultural event which happens every year in the month of June and attracts tourists globally. The event has a major prominence in the region since it highlights the cultural heritage of the Ladakhi people. Although the event lasts for three weeks however this year it has been reduced to two weeks due to the upcoming elections in the region. The major activities include dancing by the local tribes, yak races and art competition. Additionally, there will be several shops where visitors can buy ethnic stuff and souvenirs. Furthermore, visitors can enjoy local cuisine at food stalls in the event.
Hence I believe it will be an alluring experience for you to explore different facets of the local culture, therefore, I will be able to make some local arrangements for your lodging at a nearby hotel which is in close proximity of the location where the event will take place.
I look forward to your response so that I can proceed with the bookings.
Warm regards
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uisine at food stalls in the event. Hence I believe it will be an alluring experi...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...r lodging at a nearby hotel which is in close proximity of the location where the event will ta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roceed with the bookings. Warm regards Saud
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78403755869 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69406673036 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8006334869 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235096479889 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068357078204 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539874721489 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136201966893 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051064052406 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.