Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Dear Jot,
How are you? I am fine and I hope this letter finds you well. I am basically writing this to invite you to my family party.
My brother is about to move to abroad for his further study and to make him relax me and my all cousin have decided to throw a party for him. In this party, my family, relatives, and friend are invited. To facilitate everyone I have decided the party will be on Sunday so that nobody would be able to give an excuse.
As per the planning, I have booked a room in the hotel and also decided on the meal which would be served. Apart from this, I asked for his favorite singer’s performance in this party which is a surprise for him. We have decided to dance on one song.
I know you will say what you have to with such a party where all relatives are invited but I would like to let you know that you are also like my family member. My parents really adore you and they also wish to see you at this party. In the evening we will have a party where no elderly will be included.
I assume you will accept my invitation and come to this party. Write me back after reading the letter as I look forward to your reply.
Best Wishes,
Kinu

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook forward to your reply. Best Wishes, Kinu
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, well, apart from, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09956709957 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0626422331 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536796536797 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6831898359 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289221899836 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903313553052 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056639345988 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157182845533 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05568307226 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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