You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Dear Jot,
My name is Kinu, and I got your name and address from Pen Pal International. I am very glad to have to write to you and become pen pals.
Let me introduce myself first. I am currently working as a Visa Filling Officer in International Company. I graduated from Punjabi University, Chandigarh with a Master in Computer Application in July 2016. I am enjoying my job but I still want to grab some international exposure hence, I thought to get a doctoral degree in computer science and will file an application this September.
As far as, my hobbies are concerned I like to cook food whenever I have some free time. Apart from this, I like reading novels, listening to sweet and light music, and playing basketball. I am interested in listening to stories from elderly ones.
I will be visiting New York this July as my sister is going to get married. The marriage is on 8th July and I will be there for at least three weeks. If you are free, I would be very happy to meet you in person. We can spend a day together if you are ready.
Well, let me finish here. I am eagerly waiting for your reply to this letter. I would like to know your interest and your life. I hope that we can become good friends.
Yours Faithfully,
Kinu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r in Computer Application in July 2016. I am enjoying my job but I still want to ...
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Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill file an application this September. As far as, my hobbies are concerned I li...
^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke to know your interest and your life. I hope that we can become good friends. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, still, well, apart from, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4025974026 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61418818621 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6374057888 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232314545307 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719973694977 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889038715843 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117872148562 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948851069272 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.