You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Hi Neha,
I hope you are doing well, as this a first communication between us, let me share with you a few details about myself.
Firstly, I am a post-graduate with a degree in Masters in Computer Applications and have been working in the Information Technological industry for the past 6 years as a Technical Engineer.
Being an engineer at a technical firm, my present tasks include working on a variety of programming challenges, mentoring the junior folks and co-ordinating the communication between the clients and the management. Consequently, I usually do not get much time to follow up on my passions, however I do find the time to pursue my hobbies over the weekends. Which include going on a long drive in a pleasant weather, enjoying the sport of cricket and enjoying an occasional movie with friends.
We can connect more with each other in the upcoming month. As, I will be in your town during the next month due to a client meeting and thinking of stopping by at your house. Really hoping to meet you in person.
Yours Faithfully,
Gaurav
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8087431694 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97970080029 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5643796323 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179242909898 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754942753496 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072425590731 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952503655863 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748853492669 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.