In most of the countries people prefer to live in a rented apartment rather than buying a home What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rented accommodation

Essay topics:

In most of the countries, people prefer to live in a rented apartment rather than buying a home. What
are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rented accommodation?

Home is a very abstract concept in my country, It's definition always varies from person to person. Some people prefer to live in a very big house and call it a home, however some prefer to dwell in small apartments that can be rented or bought. If we look at this from a global perspective, nowadays the trend is shifting more towards the rented apartments. It has become a culture in the modern society, where people prefer to live in apartments and it's success is majorly attributed to the advantages over a permanently owned residence.
There are several benefits of having a rented accommodation as compared to owned houses. Firstly, it is easier to maintain and clean an apartment, in contrast to a home. Secondly, If the apartment is a part of the society, then you get even more facilities such as a gym, swimming pool and security. Thirdly, it makes it simpler to move, in case of a job change or any other reason. Lastly, it is a really cheap option to take a rented dwelling instead of a permanent home, as buying a home will need a huge amount of finances which results in people taking out loans.
Along with the advantages, there are multiple drawbacks of having a rented accommodation as well. First of all, renters do not get stability, as the property is not owned the occupant, the owner can ask him to vacate the premises anytime. Furthermore, the landlord can also decide to increase the rent whenever he wants. In addition to that, renters are bound by the terms of the legal agreement, resulting in restrictions such as, you may not have any rights to keep pets or make any kind of changes to the apartment.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons of having a rented apartment, however the benefits of renting outweigh it's drawbacks.

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Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65064102564 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71074085074 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0270053022 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295019755303 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880706438587 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782282219203 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161362590436 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740983288619 0.056905535591 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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