You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your wo

Essay topics:

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
- Describe the problem with the equipment
- Explain how this problem is affecting your work
- Say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about a Wireless Router that I bought from your store a few months ago. Unfortunately, it has suddenly stopped working and I am unable to connect to the Internet and work from home. I am hoping you would replace it immediately.

The Netgear - AC1750 Dual-Band Wi-Fi Router that I purchased from you was operational until the end of last week but it is not working at the moment. I cannot find out the exact reason for it not to function but I have tried to do some initial diagnostics without any luck. I tried a similar router that I borrowed from a friend and it worked as expected.
I work from home as a freelancer and my work depends on an uninterrupted Internet connection. I have several ongoing projects and I must meet the deadlines to retain my client base. As you can see, I am totally dependent on this equipment to get connected to the Internet, so I need to get this router fixed immediately. I suggest that you either replace the device with a new one or repair it within the next two days.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Ritika

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...om a friend and it worked as expected. I work from home as a freelancer and my w...
^
Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n an uninterrupted Internet connection. I have several ongoing projects and I mus...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49065420561 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65232124833 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2912363278 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221251341984 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761833095339 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467279501018 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128119099165 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044925152195 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...om a friend and it worked as expected. I work from home as a freelancer and my w...
^
Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n an uninterrupted Internet connection. I have several ongoing projects and I mus...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49065420561 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65232124833 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2912363278 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221251341984 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761833095339 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467279501018 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128119099165 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044925152195 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.