Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
The modern world as we know it is growing more and more mundane each passing day. A routine life is not something people want nowadays, they want some excitement and adventures in their existence. However, that is not possible for public who have regular jobs. These people prefer to take vacations and go to places where they can feel their adrenaline pumping. For instance The Himalaya's, Sahara desert or even Antarctica. There are a lot of places where thrill and excitement can be found.
The strenuous environment in these tourist locations is the ultimate selling point for the tourists to visit there. Sahara desert has high temperatures and scorching heat in the daytime, however the night has a freezing temperatures. Similarly, Antarctica has below lower temperatures, moreover the sun can be seen for 24 hours during summer and the same can be observed for moon during winters. Meanwhile, Himalaya's have freezing winds and lower air pressure which causes breathing problems the higher you climb.
There are several pros and cons of visiting these places, the rush of excitement that is felt when visiting such locations is a primary advantage. Secondly, It helps people in getting over their phobias. Consequently, the cons entail the dangers of pursuing such activities, such as getting a heatstroke while walking through the Sahara desert or slipping and falling from great heights while climbing the Everest.
One recent example is when I went for paragliding in Bir, Himachal Pradesh. A place famous for holding world cup for paragliding and one of the highest places in Asia for the same. We went to a height of 1300 metres above sea level and jumped from the while hanging onto the gliders, However, before jumping I was sweating and trembling due to my fear of heights. But, once I was airborne the excitement and the joy of flying was a once in a lifetime experience. The views and the scenery was breathtaking from the sky.
To summarise, different people have separate personalities and passions in life. It depends on the person's choice and what they want to do in their spare time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97450424929 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66558238863 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580736543909 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8765745973 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253105696217 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646554418218 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639585074928 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113009512462 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527249262476 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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