You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company to do
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am a level 10 employee of your organisation and my company provided laptop has malfunctioned, due to which I am unable to continue working.
The issue started few days back, when my machine started making a lot of noise, which I assumed was due to the improper rotation of the hard disk. Consequently, this morning the laptop refused to even boot up and was throwing an exception saying that no boot device has been found. Moreover, I have run all the automatic diagnostics available, which also did not amount to anything.
Since, I am working from home currently and now that my laptop is not working, this has put a stop to any work I was doing. The remote connectivity option provided by the company is also not helping, as all the work is to be done within the client network which requires a VPN connectivity.
As per the procedure, I have raised a ticket for the replacement of my machine within the company portal. Kindly approve the request and dispatch a new machine which is compliant with the company policies.
If you have any queries regarding the ticket, please revert to this mail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
...tter to inform you that I am a level 10 employee of your organisation and my company pro...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71904761905 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68927912687 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5781336532 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183609352739 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695733725163 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412690313737 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941480728819 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396275788907 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.