Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of society. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?
- Write at least 250 words.
- You should spend around 40 minutes on this task.
The modern world is a fast paced moving entity, and in this quickly operating society, people need to find some activities or hobbies to relieve the stress of everyday life. Example of such stress relieving activities is Art and Music. In some parts of the world these two activities are even considered to be the basic building blocks of society.
Although, the place of art and music has reduced significantly in recent years due to the advancement of technology. Personally, I believe that it still holds a significance for some people in the modern technological world. However, it is also true that due to the advancement in science and machines, the procedure of making art or music has become even simpler. But, even then there is a minority in current generation that still tries to find the time and energy to pursue their passions. These people are the one's who are acting as an anchor for these activities in today's world.
There is also a traditional and cultural importance attached to these activities all over the world. Few examples are cultural dances, heritage sculptures and traditional singing. In my opinion, these should be taught to the kids in school from an early age, as not only will it keep our ancestral teachings alive but also have a positive impact on the health of the children. From scientific research it has been proven that keeping a regular learning of any form of art is beneficial to an individual. Such as dance is a form of rigorous exercise and keeps the body in a good health, another such example is painting as it helps in the mental growth by helping in a healthy expression of views. Music and Dance require a strict regimen and schedule to follow up on, It helps to cultivate discipline within the kids from an early age.
To summarize, I would say that there is still a spark alive for art and music in the present world and if we want that spark to turn back into a flame we need to introduce our children with them at an early age.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62889518414 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61279810955 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526912181303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9999483204 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241903467943 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790363838683 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597533271749 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14615113759 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045895221784 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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