In most of the countries, people prefer to live in a rented apartment rather than buying a home. What
are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rented accommodation?
Home is a very abstract concept in my country, It's definition always varies from person to person. Some people prefer to live in a very big house and call it a home, however some prefer to live in small apartments that can be rented or bought. If we look at this from a global perspective, nowadays the trend is shifting more towards the rented apartments. It has become a culture in the modern society, where people prefer to live in apartments and it's success is majorly attributed to the advantages over a permanently owned residence.
There are several benefits of having a rented accommodation as compared to owned houses. Firstly, it is easier to maintain and clean an apartment, in contrast to a home. Secondly, If the apartment is a part of the society, then you get even more facilities such as a gym, swimming pool and security. Thirdly, it makes it simpler to move, in case of a job change or any other reason. Lastly, it is a really cheap option to take a rented accommodation instead of a permanent home, as buying a home will need a huge amount of finances which results in people taking out loans.
Along with the advantages, there are multiple drawbacks of having a rented accommodation as well. First of all, you do not get stability, as the property is not owned the occupant, the owner can ask him to vacate the premises anytime. Furthermore, the landlord can also decide to increase the rent whenever he wants. In addition to that, you are bound by the terms of the legal agreement, resulting in restrictions such as, you may not have any rights to keep pets or make any kind of changes to the apartment.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons of having a rented apartment, however the benefits of renting outweigh it's drawbacks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 937.175257732 154% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63782051282 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74189492045 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 290.88556701 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.950845528 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 4.34317383033 357% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31379738645 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941619694917 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899934358902 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171369531772 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085732770427 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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