Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are
difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays more individuals love to travel to some unique places which have a tough situation to bear, such as deserts and cold mountains or the Antarctic.
Some people are more keen on adventures and love to have an exciting trip with lots of unexpected stories. actually, they not only do not bother themselves, but also enjoy the trip more than an ordinary vacation. this kind of trip is highly recommended for those who have an energetic spirit and outgoing personality, so they can release their energy through experiencing a hard situation. For example, I had been camping in the Zagros mountains for two times and each time, I had a daunting feeling about insect’s bite or being lost, but I enjoyed the trip and learned how to survive in the tough situation.
In addition, visiting some untouched places especially remote rigains with a significant climate has a lot of benefits. the remarkable aim for traveling to these destinations would be to witness the beauty of the nature. this includes the biodiversity of that place plus the mesmerizing scenery;Therefore, some people find peace of mind in this difficult situation. for example, sleeping in a protected area in a camp right middle of the Sahara desert among locals and ferocious animals, has the meaningful paradox that makes me feel secure and safe.
On the other hand, some people believe that this kind of traveling is dangerous. the main reason would be some errors in cell phone- network coverage which means, if someone got into a trouble, there would be no accessibility to a rescue team. also, these dangerous areas are usually far from the health center and this will make the situation worse when injury comes.
On top of that, the less experienced have a misconception view about hard moments in the journey. this type of traveler will refuse to continue with a group and this will have a huge impact on the group’s direction and goal, leading to frustration and disappointment among the members of the team.
All in all, I do prefer to visit tough places to measure my tolerance in bad situations and I aim to challenge myself in traveling to Kenya. this will gives me self-confidence and enough experience to further adventures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84263709636 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6435300347 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141390527983 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440048758467 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479025727833 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760348345333 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647435992589 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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