Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing
the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have
little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
They are found some people claiming that a certain way to improve public health is to increase the number of sports facilities, while others insist that this approach is not effective and other alternatives should be in action.
First and the most important factor in public health is the availability of sports equipment. Psychologic point of view, for building a good habit such as doing exercise we need to add more stimulate of that action in our environment. in this case, implementing more sports facilities the more it would be seen by individuals, so people's vision commends them for exercising more. For example, placing lots of sports equipment in parks can encourage people to exercise. Gradually, this new good habits spread among all members of society. Which means, healthier community. In addition, some people do not have proper access to sports clubs and equipment for many reasons, such as poverty or living in remote places. By applying more facilities, they would also benefit from this method like others in big cities, leading to equality in society. Besides, health will improve.
There are some other ways to cover the health problems. Government can raise awareness about the bad consequences of having excess oil, fat, and sugar in foods and schedule healthy programs in the media to inform people about the disadvantages of fast foods. Or assign money to local conceals to organize sports events, cooperate with Local teams and create an active environment for people to exercise. But these methods cannot be applied if there were not enough facilities in any area; therefore, there should be more options first.
In conclusion, I think the quality and quantity of the sports facility is a key factor in people's attention to exercise and have a wholesome body. Otherwise, the other options cannot be completely efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20198675497 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66704948059 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1677838507 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318034583117 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100354354893 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105109085748 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215798325957 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113711492594 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.