Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing
the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have
little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
They are found some people claiming that the certain way to improve public health is to increase number of sports facility, while others insist that this approach is not effective and other alternatives should be in action.
first and the most important factor on public health is the availability of sport equipment. psychologic point of view,for building a good habits such as doing exercise we need to add more stimulate of that action in our environment. in this case by implementing more sport facilities the more it would be seen by individuals,so people’s vision commend them to exercise more. For example, placing lots of sport equipments in parks can encourage people to exercise.gradualy,this new good habits speard among all members of society. which means,healtiher society. in addition some people do not have a proper access to sports clubs and equipments because of many reasons, such as poverty or living in remote places. by applying more facilities they would also get benefits from this method like others in big cities which leads to equality in society.besides,health will improve.
There are some other ways to cover the health problems. government can raise awareness about bad consequences of having excess oil,fat and sugar in foods and schedule healthy programs in media to inform people about the disadvantages of fastfoods. or assign money to local conceals to organize sport events cooperate with Local teams and create active environment for people to exercise. but these methods cannot be applied if there was not enough facilities in any area;therefore, there should be more options first.
in conclusion I think quality and quantity of the sport facility is a key factor two arrows peoples attention to exercise and have a wholesome body. otherwise the other options cannot be compeletly efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32423208191 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09288089671 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6040656522 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321776429137 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108197503172 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111663978362 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215289453954 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114469643037 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.