Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In recent times, people are becoming more adventurous and risk takers, as they are preferring to travel the places are living conditions are extreme. Tourism have reached around the globe recently very fast, which makes people more curious to explore
untouched beauty of Earth like Antartic or Sahara desert.
Unlikely old times, when people want to stay in a hotel on a hill station or take sun bath on a beach, now days, choices are quite opposite where tourist want to travel. In my opinion, there are lots of pros and cons for the traveler who chose these places with difficult and adverse climatic conditions, which I will discuss in further.
Firstly, if we discuss on benefits, people who wants something challenging and exciting in their lives, going to such places feeds to there hunger for adrenaline. For instance, I recently did paragliding in Himalayas which is vey high from sea level, but it gave me satisfaction that I did something exciting. Furthermore, people learn survival skills by visiting places where living conditions are so difficult. For instance, you can get experience that in extreme cold temperatures how will you get heat, what you will eat, hunting. Travelers who are going to extreme hot conditions will learn the value to water and tress along with the life lessons for survival.
In addition to pros, we could have some disadvantages as well, like during your stay, if any natural calamity occurs along with extreme climatic conditions, than this could be risky for your life. Traveling is good for experiences and learnings, but not at the cost of your life. For example, lots of people plan to climb Mt Everest and they start there journey, however not all of them succeed, few lost their lives during midway only.
We can summarize by concluding that now tourists choices are changing with time and people are becoming more adventurous and risk takers and they want to explore places on globe which have extreme living conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99093655589 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53072322011 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583081570997 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3485441497 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243369948588 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827862126772 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581271622171 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110401600896 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447472322799 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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