Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Tourism over the span of time has increased a lot due to exploration of new places that were once uneasy to reach because of hard and different conditions. Farfetched places that were considered tough are being concurred by the thrill seekers. This has affected the tourism industry a lot in a positive way. It has led to the discovery of new places to visit for wander-lusters. Moreover, it has improved the economy of those regions.
Adventures have led to the discoveries of the destinations which were unknown and were considered out of bound due to their extreme conditions. Deserts and glaciers have recently become a great deal of interest for tourists. For example, Sahara Desert is now one of the most visited tourist destination. It provides the opportunity to fulfill the thrill and enjoy different sports like desert safari, desert skiing. This has brought a huge amount of revenue to the economy of Asia.
Over the time, the zest of adventurers for exploration of new places has resulted into new interests like glaciers and ice adventures. .For example, Antarctica, for decades, was assumed to be very cold for survival of human beings, but, now its very popular among tourists and is turning into a holiday spot. This has affected the animal population over there for certain reasons. Tourists have disturbed their natural habitat and living conditions. Weather conditions over there are also changing due to human activities.
The tourism of new places has brought opportunities for people to learn about various cultures and thrills, along with increasing the capital generated from tourism. Vsists to far off and different places should be promoted but some laws and conditions should be implicates to prevent any damage to the natural life and atmosphere, and keeping he earths beauty intact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15878378378 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75418658342 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3912632784 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8235294118 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19437305901 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625716384661 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641395594208 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115169685435 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213756866303 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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