During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman.
In your letter,
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter as a kind reminder for our meeting and discussion about possibility of job at one of your restaurants.
We met during plane journey to Oman on 2nd of August, I was sitting beside you. We had a discussion about your business of a restaurant chain. As per your suggestion, I am contacting you about the possibility of getting a suitable job at one of your restaurants. I have done MBA with specualization in finance so I am pretty much interested in getting a role that is in the domain of financial matters or related to that. I will be happy to get any role of these; cashier or accounting or finance department as I have some diversified professional experience well.
Alongwith MBA in finance, I have a experience of working as a cachier in bank. Moreover, I am currently working as assistant finance officer in telecommunication industry. My career interest are moving towards restaurant sector. My educational backgroung and professional exprience coupled with my passion for this persuading career in hoteling will be as asset for you restaurant chain.
I am looking forward for you reply and working for your restaurant chain
Yours faithfully,
Bilal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l. Alongwith MBA in finance, I have a experience of working as a cachier in b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20206347057 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9046027115 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252004805003 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956630620322 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822768183486 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162338465848 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397106513469 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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