Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Professional environments over the time have improved.Work places have become more friendly and allow for social interactions. The recruiters now look for the social personality and lifestyle along with the professional and technical skills.There is a hot debate over this topic wether social and personal skills are important characteristics to look for while hiring someone or only professional skills matter.
The advantage of knowing someone as a person along with their technical skills provides you the oppurtunity to asses their psychology and temprament. For instance, For hiring an HR manager, if a person is short temepred and lack proper communication skills, he or she would not be suitable for that particular job.
Judging people on basis of their nature or habits may sometimes cause the employer to overlook their capabilities as a professional.Personal activities and marital status does not affect the knowledge or make a person less capable. For example if a bachelorette having more experience is preferred over a married individual that would be unfair. If a candidate is hired just because they have the interests similar to those of the interviewer instead of their skills, that would be discrimination and the company would also be deprived of someone more professional.
To conclude, i would agree with the opinion that having knowledge of someone's personality is benificial but it should not be the criteria for hiring someone. It creates an interactive environment for the people working together and makes working easy and better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40163934426 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23360396019 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9170937026 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.444444444 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228463441573 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984087505123 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382531780332 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144549264017 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382267610928 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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