You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sarah
Hope you are doing well. I recieved your letter asking for my opinion to choose between joining college or to work. I gave a lot of thought to this matter and I would suggest that you start a job rather than getting enrolled in a college.
Since you have recently completed an interior designing course from a world renowned institution. You should utilize your fresh learning and knowledge and develop your skillset in practical environment. The regular college routine; studying along with doing assignments and assessments consumes all your attention and time. This would frustrate you as you will have to keep you love for desiginign on hold.
Since you have moved out from your parents home and living independently, therefore you have to support yourself financiall. I would encourage you to get a job and establish yourself in the line of interior designing.
As you told me that you got a call for an internship oppurtunity in one of America's top designer firm. I would support the idea of joining it. this will give you the experience and and a chance to learn the business skills to run a firm of your own in the future. besides, if you still want to get a degree you can opt for weekend classes, as many colleges are offering weekend graduation programmes.
I look forward to hearing from you soon and would love to get a chance to visit the firm. I have heard a lot about there amazingly beautiful interior setup.
Yours truly,
Aqsa
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her than getting enrolled in a college. Since you have recently completed an interior...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o keep you love for desiginign on hold. Since you have moved out from your paren...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave moved out from your parents home and living independently, therefore you hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and living independently, therefore you have to support yourself financiall. I w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...g it. this will give you the experience and and a chance to learn the business skills t...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...o run a firm of your own in the future. besides, if you still want to get a degree you ...
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Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ful interior setup. Yours truly, Aqsa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75294117647 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63351363756 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5139313383 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293051599733 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096415886724 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490352822195 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173808074526 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458075881681 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.