You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Krishna,
Hi!!! I hope you are in the pink of life there. Concerning recommending whether to opt for College or Job, I will definitely recommend you to get the job first before going for further educational programmes.
To be very honest with you, in my last 3 years of work experience, I have learned a lot as compared to what we have been taught in our engineering curriculum. There are daily challenges which need to face, and the way corporates works are best to experience, and you will surely enjoy it.
After getting a job, you can go for master degree in the specific field you enjoy working in; this is what I am doing it. When you work somewhere, getting your hands dirty or researching the products, it not only provides a vast experience about the topic but also makes one realise about its career likes and dislikes. Once you get to know about your strengths in the core field, take a masters degree in that specific field which would enhance your knowledge a lot.
Finally, since you were really good at designing and analytical thinking. You can utilise that knowledge and get the job in the relevant field. If you are interested, I can recommend you in the same company, I am working in. You can send me your latest resume, and I will forward it to the HR department.
Make a wise decision and let me know if any more help required from my end.
Yours sincerely,
Shreyas
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57936507937 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56889204701 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7624793941 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7692307692 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249051952136 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913590157013 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681347710255 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129427240355 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843174563907 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.