Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Adventure is a part of human life. People tend to achieve things which seems impossible to others. It requires impeccable courage and a positive mindset when you are on such a journey, which has been not committed so far by anyone or have been attempted by only fewer people. Result of this, the number of tourists have increased significantly visiting places like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic where surviving conditions are intriguing. The pros and cons for tourist who visit such sites are mentioned in the below paragraphs.
Firstly, the citizens who travel to such places requires comprehensive training and experience not only to be physically fit but also to stay mentally healthy. Surviving in those isolated places is itself challenging; one can become fundamentally strong by facing such dramatic climate, eventually praising the factual aspects of life. Secondly, campers travelling in groups can actually learn to boost team spirit, whereas there are ambitious people who want to achieve, which seemed impossible by others. For example, the man in Newzealand is preparing himself to complete full Iron-man in Antarctic region. This will make him recognized globally for making it possible, which seemed impossible so far.
On the other hand, the surviving in such conditions is some times close to death experience or even costing life of many. Many campers who visit Antarctica every year do not get back due to inevitable life taking climatic conditions. Even sometimes people are left paralyzed in the desert, due to the lack of water and food. In such solitary places, you will be helpless to get out of the terrible situation you got into. There is a documentary on the man showcasing his journey in dessert, where he has to cut his hand to survive in the helpless situation.
To sum up with, every coin has two faces, on the one hand, you can experience the life out of the box whereas on the other hand you might have to face the death if anything goes on such trekking.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, even so, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6905288659 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8023436887 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220443369369 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697125997826 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793936701115 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127630491949 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842655928439 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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