A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter,
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
On behalf of residents in Indralok, we thank you for your recent announcement, to spend a certain amount as a gift for the local people in this area. As the choice is up to the general public, whether they want to opt for the development of local sports for children or open air-concerts, I have a suggestion as mention below.
By sponsoring the sports team of youths, will help the family who are not able to support financially and also comprehensive training. The donation will help children to be skilled and confident while representing at the national and global level.
On the other hand, the concert may boost the morales of the people also to take music as a profession. Many of them do not consider music as a career option these days, due to limited opportunities in the nearby areas. Such a concert can motivate them to be on stage and entertain the crowd coming to the show.
My suggestion would be to keep the concert as a charity funded so that whatever money comes in can be utilised for the development of the teenager's sports team. This idea can help to adroit both sports as well as music culture in the local area.
I hope you take the necessary decision as fruitful for the community.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... this area. As the choice is up to the general public, whether they want to opt for the devel...
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Line 8, column 203, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...his idea can help to adroit both sports as well as music culture in the local area. I hop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67713004484 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68058681215 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587443946188 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3083546669 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281198187321 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888259536229 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849937118404 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135250350462 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117636427596 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.