Write about the following topic:
Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's world, where most of the times parents are employed in the society and gets very little time to pay attention to their children. Nevertheless, many times parenting fails due to the lack of knowledge about it and the required desired skills, which predominantly affects the upbringings of their pupils. It is required for schools to acknowledge the concern to younger generations which is addressed in the below paragraphs.
Parenting is not an easy task to fulfil, educating the young people in the community can make a substantial difference in shaping the future of their child. Decision making is difficult for teenagers about the pros and cons of their gratification, which leads them towards poor habits like consumption of drugs at a very young age if the consequences are not addressed to them. Furthermore, the decision of career is quite challenging due to the dense competition. Progenitor must help them with the experience faced by them so that the children will not get any depression with regards to the path they have chosen.
Along with education, parents must be equipped with the desirable skills for proper upbringing of their young one's. It is justified that, listening skills of the parents can significantly influence the understanding of the problems faced by their pupil and prosperous them with the right solution. Likewise, both father and mother need to be calm minded with their children when they are young. The parent's friendliness character with their child is successful in getting them at the right platform in society.
There is no doubt in agreeing that if a school provides the parenting lessons to their classes, they will not get into lousy influence of misleading future. As a result of this, it will not only help the family for better future but will also contribute towards the growth of the nation along with the world if the noble knowledge is imparted at the right age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required desired" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'desiring' or 'to be desired'.
Suggestion: desiring; to be desired
... of knowledge about it and the required desired skills, which predominantly affects the...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...their children when they are young. The parents friendliness character with their child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0062305296 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78511293627 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8326709275 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17596852475 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688586930217 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514211662112 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107316514337 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494269272438 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.