Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Food is the basic need of every individual. Not only eating habits, but also eating culture changes from region to region. India has 26 states and more interestingly every state has their own special food culture. Vegetarians and Non-vegetarian food has always been a debatable topic around the world since very long time. Each side has its own advantages but I mostly disagree with not consuming meat and fish which will be discussed in further paragraphs.
Vegan diet is getting lots of popularity these days as it has been exercised by some of the top athletes which includes the cricketer of this era; Virat Kohli as well as the best performer in Formula 1 Racing; Lewis Hamilton. They promote a lot about a vegan diet and shared knowledge about how a vegetarian diet has helped them keeping fit and maintaining great physique which directly improves their on-field performance.
Nevertheless, there are athletes who have been outstanding with their records since very long time and they have never been on a vegan diet. Study shows meat and fish provides the adequate quantity of the nutrients to the body which are not in available in fruits and vegetables. Top footballer since last two decades; Chirstiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi always prefer having meat on their diet list. Endurance activities always prefer having meat and fish for its high calorie intake as well as proteins to repair muscles effectively.
Furthermore,if the whole population of the world starts feeding only on plant based foods, the requirement will be so high difficult to cope up with and fulfil demands. Secondly the demand for area required to farm will eventually lead to deforestation[a1] , giving rise to global warming effects.
Vegeterian diet should always be a part of diet, and one should not get totally depended on Fish and Meat, Keeping a balance between both will yield better performing body as well as maintaining ecological balance in the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08074534161 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71724700032 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614906832298 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9474018484 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188331376828 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570548510052 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031338518933 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868878594856 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385194683891 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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