Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people argue that they prefer to be vegan as it has health benefits for their personal health and nature. In this essay, I will discuss about the being advantages and drawbacks of being a veg or non veg meal and will support my view by balancing the themselves about it.
Firstly, People who opt not to consume and meat or fish is their own choice. As some people might be allergic which can be poisonous for an individual. However, it might be dangerous to the world as it can spread some contamination and any virus for Instance, Lately the cause for the pandemic has a theory of consuming kind of animals which led to spread across the world. Furthermore, domestic animals get harmed and killed in order to enjoy as a meal. It is traditionally a part of the business for which killing some animals are ruthlessly tortured which is against humanity.
On the other hand, consuming meat, fish, or any other steaks has nutrients that can be beneficial for others. As per statistics, around 40% of people add them to their diet as to add protein and make it healthy. Although, it sometimes adds fat which leads to the risk of unhealthy risk factors such as heart attack, the population who dieted on vegetables has similar risks on other unhealthy reasons such as living a sedentary life, and not being active enough. Furthermore, the animals that will be delighted to be in a meal are domestic ones that are used on a reproduction basis and has no chance of extinction.
To sum up, Despite avoiding the consumption of non-vegetarian food will not only be beneficial for their own or the world but, it can be a choice of people to enjoy them and stay healthy which will not add up to any other life risks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'themselves'?
Suggestion: the; themselves
...l and will support my view by balancing the themselves about it. Firstly, People who opt not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58306188925 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61401412523 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3487549351 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194867872024 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805841145273 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572060470344 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124958368971 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354860157489 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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