Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Few people opt vegan over non vegan diet with the belief that it will help in improving their health life and also add more value to the overall world. In this essay, I’ll discuss this belief of some people preferring vegetables over meat or fish. I will also present my opinion about how I feel non vegan diet can benefit our health and not cause damage to nature.
Firstly, I believe the game of prey and predator is an important part of food chain. Humans fall at the top level in food chain. For example, worms are eaten by chicken and eventually chicken is eaten by humans. The fish and meat are rich in essential elements required by our body. Fish is the rich source of protein, similarly doctors recommend having soups of meat when the immunity of body reaches to lowest level. Hence, by avoiding the meat or fish, people are losing on lot of important health benefits. Secondly, these animals have a very good reproduction rate, so we do not have to worry about extinction of these animals or fishes.
On the other hand, when people look out for vegan diet, they believe since they are not eating meat they will not be attracted to infections or diseases that spreads through animal meat. Vegan people feel they are saving natural habitat by not killing animals or saving them from being killed. For instance, there has been a rapid increase of 50% of animal conserving organizations in the last year. Because of above mentioned reasons, some people feel that by supporting no meat and fish diet, they are benefitting the world and their health.
In my opinion, the risk of getting infected due to meat eating is very less compared to the benefits that we get by consuming it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the lowest'.
Suggestion: to the lowest
... meat when the immunity of body reaches to lowest level. Hence, by avoiding the meat or f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28977194401 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7518184976 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252775776986 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801645016906 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667914342486 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138736292277 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605005058349 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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