You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Rising population has resulted in problems which world needs to be prepared for to avoid detrimental growth of the society. Even though, the technology has improved tremendously compared to past decade, but the problems related to demanding education, food scarcity and health care systems outweighs an adequate infrastructure development which needs to be overcome in foreseen future.
India has the second highest population in the world, moreover, it is considered to be the most densely populated country in the world. In coming years, it is estimated that the population will grow two times considering the statistics and data analysis done by experts. Owing to this, the food supply required to fulfil the rising demand of nation could be challenging along with the employment generation for the people graduating from schools and colleges. Moreover, the educational infrastructure and healthcare facilities are already overcrowded by the present population, also the facilities are not up to the mark in the present time.
During pandemic, these problems were evident which can hinder the growth of the nation. Undoubtedly, to avoid negative consequences in the future, the policymakers should take necessary precaution by regulating laws and prepare for the upcoming demand. Firstly, to control population, birth control is essential; "one child per family" can help us to plateau the population. Secondly, upgrading the educational and health care facilities is mandatory to empower knowledge and curb the spread of diseases. Thirdly, with the industrialisation in remote areas without harming the environment could be lucrative in terms of investment and employment.
To sum up, these problems are faced globally, with the proper agreement between nations, it can be tackled together. However, basic facilities like food, cloth and shelter should be considered prominent problems which need to plan now to make future sustainable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51186440678 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9707643739 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 295.0 20.2975951904 1453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1626.0 106.682146367 1524% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 295.0 20.7667163134 1421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 93.0 7.06120827912 1317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207335471748 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207335471748 0.084324248473 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118434080811 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277882774569 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.0 13.0946893788 1161% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -244.87 50.2224549098 -488% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.7 11.3001002004 1068% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.16 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.46 8.58950901804 273% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 65.0 9.78957915832 664% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 120.0 10.1190380762 1186% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 120.0 10.7795591182 1113% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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