Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear Prashant,
Hello!!! I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your life. I would like to thank you for accompanying me. As you are aware, I was keen for a new job at my home town, Mumbai; the day before yesterday, they have confirmed my joining date. Before leaving, there are few furniture which I would like to give it to you.
As you have been very helpful during my stay, and also you are getting married and shifting to another spacious apartment in coming months; these things might be of great use to you. Above that, the furniture is hardly being used, and can definitely suite your apartment by filling in empty space.
There is a dining table with beautifully carved legs out from wood with the rectangular strong glass without any sharp edges above that, four wooden chairs which have same aesthetic colour combination as a dining table, and a wooden swing chair which is quite handy and can be hanged anywhere in the apartment.
I have asked the local transporter, he can get it delivered to your address or there is an application called Porter, which we can book it whenever you are available. Since I am leaving before next weekend, we need to get this done as soon as possible.
Share your new address and availability schedule, I will book the vehicle and share the details with you.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...joining date. Before leaving, there are few furniture which I would like to give it...
^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun furniture seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little furniture'.
Suggestion: little furniture
...joining date. Before leaving, there are few furniture which I would like to give it to you. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our combination as a dining table, and a wooden swing chair which is quite handy ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65271966527 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44092686954 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.328842716 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170735102688 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725305285078 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425816961949 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893984583454 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635736150877 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...joining date. Before leaving, there are few furniture which I would like to give it...
^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun furniture seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little furniture'.
Suggestion: little furniture
...joining date. Before leaving, there are few furniture which I would like to give it to you. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our combination as a dining table, and a wooden swing chair which is quite handy ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65271966527 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44092686954 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.328842716 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170735102688 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725305285078 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425816961949 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893984583454 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635736150877 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.