Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing in regards to the advertisement in the Times of India newspaper for limited enrollment in Autocad Course for students you have certification in basic knowledge of computers.
I have the necessary basic skills required for the computer operations, I have been using computers for past ten years and most of my working abilities are depended on it. With the help of youtube and other online platforms, I have acquired the fundamental skills required for operating computer efficiently. Moreover, in schools and colleges the computer skills are included in the curriculum to meet the requirements of competent world. Undoubtedly, this course is crucial for my career growth in engineering prospect.
I might not have proper documentation or certification for elementary computer knowledge, but I can assure you that I have adequate skills to fulfil your requirement as mentioned in the advertisement. I request you to provide me with an exemption from this mandatory basic computer knowledge skill certificate and allow me to enrol for this program.
I am hoping for a positive response on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... I hope you are doing well I am writing in regards to the advertisement in the Times of India...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04718661397 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 190.0 16.3608247423 1161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 985.0 76.5299724578 1287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 190.0 16.8248392259 1129% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 4.34317383033 530% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355014199099 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.355014199099 0.0766984524023 463% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212424542196 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112597912456 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 98.0 8.37731958763 1170% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -129.83 70.7449484536 -184% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.6 7.45979381443 1054% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.8 7.59969072165 234% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 8.62886597938 695% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 78.0 8.54432989691 913% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 8.15463917526 736% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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