Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that due to an increase in pollution; global warming is causing a detrimental effect on weather patterns. The subtle changes in climatic conditions are causing significant changes in business patterns. Some people's livelihood is getting destroyed, while others are finding it as a money-making opportunity. Both views are discussed in the below paragraphs.
There are many seasonal businesses and depend on the weather for its fulfillment; agriculutre is one. Change in weather patterns is causing an inevitable loss to the farmers. This year, in India, the rains during harvesting season have affected the crops majorly. Since less harvest was done, it is estimated that the dependency on imported fruits and vegetables will increase, thereby surge in price for daily food products. Moreover, in extreme weather conditions, the infrastructure development progress also gets affected; affecting the daily wages workers for their bread.
Due to climate changes, some business has experienced tremendous growth; for example, heating, ventilation and air-conditioning (HVAC) systems. The summers are getting much hotter, whereas the winters are showing its extreme nature. The dependency on HVAC systems has increased for better living and to survive in the unexpected weather conditions. Furthermore, the immunity of society has reduced. The illness due to changes in climate is on the rise; the pharmaceutical companies are finding it an opportunity to make sales of the medicines.
In my opinion, there are few businesses that have positive growth due to climate changes; drawbacks have adverse effects on living beings. The initiative must be taken to safeguard nature to avoid weather changes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...cant changes in business patterns. Some peoples livelihood is getting destroyed, while ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60305343511 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02082780338 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3465791601 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244888741496 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712575411398 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053568207628 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139648297626 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422182223604 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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