In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
In many parts of the world urban dwellers have increasingly suffered from traffic congestion over the last few decades. This essay is going to analyze the potential reasons and propose measures to address this congestion issue.
There are a range of factors associated with the high rate of traffic jams. Firstly, in some undeveloped countries, the roads are not designed with sufficient space to accommodate all types of vehicles ,or there are no subway systems serving as an alternative one that dwellers can opt for. As a result, there might be too much traffic simultaneously commuting on the streets , which is likely to cause gridlocked situations. Secondly, citizens use their own private vehicles, instead of public ones due to the bad quality service in public transport. For example, Vietnamese passengers usually face poor ventilation or risks of pocket lifting on buses. Thirdly, there is a lack of appropriate tax regime imposed on certain means of transport. For instance, cars are supposed to be the key determinant of traffic jams due to its size and shape. However, the governments might overlook this and have not proposed any changes with regard to the excessive use of private cars on the streets, especially during peak hours.
Several measures should be taken by the governments to tackle congestion problems. The first solution is to invest in improvement of road infrastructure. In detail, the roads should be widened or upgraded with extended underway or expressway systems so that a large number of transport can move at ease even in rush hours. The second step that can be taken by the government is allocating more funds on enhancing the quality of public transport services . There should be a higher level of security on public transport and circulation of fresh air should be focused on and enhanced. Last but not least, the government should levy a tax on private cars used in rush hours in order to deter the exceeding flow of private cars which can cause obstruction on the street.
In conclusion, some underlying factors for traffic jams in cities and towns are weakness of infrastructure and public transport system and the absence of car taxing. Several aforementioned measures have been suggested to combat this traffic issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11320754717 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84188122759 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563342318059 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.573055585 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.388888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177943630337 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530558736554 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344719603848 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109608676319 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012266029144 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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