You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.
Write a letter to the restaurant's Manager. In your letter,
• explain that you would like to apply for the job
• give some details of any relevant experience that you have
• specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Manager,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, studying in the Mumbai University, residing at Indralok, Bhayander. I came across the advertisement that you are looking for a part-time cashier for your restaurant and I would like to apply for the same.
I have prior one year's experience working in a restaurant as a cashier at Mainland China, Borivali. My fundamental duty was to accept the customer's payment, request them for feedback, check online reservations, and answer the telephone for the table's advance booking. Moreover, I also use to maintain the data of customers along with their feedback as instructed.
I have to attend classes in the morning, and my lectures end at three in the noon. Except for Monday, after five in the evening, I am available for this job till the restaurant closes. I have attached the recommendation letter from my previous employer. I am available to discuss further on call +91 99XXXXXXXX, or you can mail me on parabXXXXXXX@gmail.com
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
.... My fundamental duty was to accept the customers payment, request them for feedback, che...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ables advance booking. Moreover, I also use to maintain the data of customers along...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, as to, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07558139535 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21424354192 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4313052195 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263092731415 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855527145568 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872134227178 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147853044604 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581538649592 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.