During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
* remind him when and where you met
* tell him what kind of job you are interested in
* say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir
I hope you are doing well. I hope you remember me, the young boy sitting next to you on your flight from New Castle to London on last Saturday, 12th of March. You were coming back after signing the deal for a restaurant. One previously owned by your friend and has not been doing good business after the retirement of its head chef.
During our discussion, you told me that the restaurant requires hiring of some new serving staff and a head chef. As I told you that I am a chef and had been working in a restaurant in London. But, Iately, I have been thinking of moving back to my hometown New Castle, to look after my disabled mother. I have been looking for an opportunity to work as a head chef in new castle based resturant. You told me to forward my resume to you.
Since , experience and popularity are the two main aspects to be considered while hiring a chef. I fulfill them both along with an additional advantage of being familiar to the taste of people of my hometown. I have been working on some new recipes that I learned doing an international certification. They will help bringing innovation to the typical dishes being served. I am attaching my resume and certifications with this letter. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Aaron Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d me to forward my resume to you. Since , experience and popularity are the two ...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y resume to you. Since , experience and popularity are the two main aspects to b...
^^
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to do'.
Suggestion: to do
...king on some new recipes that I learned doing an international certification. They wi...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to bring' or 'bring'.
Suggestion: to bring; bring
...rnational certification. They will help bringing innovation to the typical dishes being ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51502145923 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63586196169 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0017089387 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179565014187 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662428884206 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599287967546 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123227769025 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050708349598 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.