During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
- remind him when and where you met
- tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Anderson,
I hope you are doing well.
We met earlier in the week when I was travelling to Dublin via Emirates Airbus and you were a passenger on the same flight. It was a connecting flight for you to reach your destination. We spoke about your blooming restaurant business and you suggested that I should get in touch with you regarding one. I hope this jogs your memory of me.
I gathered more information about the chain of restaurants you spoke about and was quite impressed by the looks of it. The restaurant offers variety of cuisines to its customer and is quite famous for it. I am interested in working as a sous chef in one of your restaurants as I want to showcase my culinary skills.
I have been working in an Italian restaurant for a while now and have gained immense experience in the art of presenting Italian dishes. I believe I can add on to the great experience provided to the customers in a certain way.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Shalaka
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 238, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sous'' or 'sou's'?
Suggestion: sous'; sou's
...for it. I am interested in working as a sous chef in one of your restaurants as I wa...
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Line 8, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n the art of presenting Italian dishes. I believe I can add on to the great exper...
^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...rs in a certain way. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Shalaka ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60773480663 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69131668425 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2632511542 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263050500772 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935367079292 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743367177112 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133768727803 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710638829655 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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