in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
The ownership of personal home is very significant to the natives of some countries and is considered better than renting a place to live. Having a place of your own to live provides shelter, regardless of the circumstances. Moreover, owning a property also gives financial security. I believe that there is a great advantage of having a personal residence but it should not become a necessity.
Some nations of the world consider it really important to own a home because it ensures of one of the basic necessities of life, ‘shelter’. It contributes to a stress free life. It results in saving money that could be spent on other necessities like education and health. For example, my brother bought a house and it saved him lot of money that enabled him to afford expensive medical education of his daughter.
Being a tenant is difficult as you have to face issues from the landlords and sometimes problems arise due to financial crisis. You have to pay rent to live under the roof whether you have money or not. Rentals are temporary and a fear of moving is constant. In addition, it saves the money to be spent as rents. For example, we were living in a rented apartment for most of our lives and had to spend a considerable section of our earnings on rents that could have otherwise been spent on improving our life standard.
The comfort of knowing that you have an independent living place relieves you of a quiet significant mental burden and boosts your confidence. This improves overall social status and life performance. However, this should not be made a liability, because it is a luxury that not everyone can afford.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...a home because it ensures of one of the basic necessities of life, ‘shelter’. It contributes to a...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sive medical education of his daughter. Being a tenant is difficult as you have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77464788732 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77802397022 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1955880151 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202502914138 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588396955631 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510921326315 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114668813743 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126058289336 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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