You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
In your letter,
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in best health. I had attended a meeting at your hotel on 10th of this month which was held in main conference hall of your hotel. It was great, however, I have realized that I had left few parpers at hotel which are of great importance.
As far as I can remember, I had placed them at the main conference table and then we left for tea at the end of session. After the tea, I didn't go back to pick those and left the hotel. So, I believe your staff may have found that on the table.
Actually, these documents contain business case studies of our upcoming project. Secondly, and most importantly, some project related approvals from competent authorities are also in those papers. So, it is of utmost importance for me and our company to get those documents back safely.
I would request you to keep those docuements within hotel as I do not want them to be send via courier. I have a busy schedule tomorrow, so I will visit your hotel on Thursday i.e. day after tomorrow. I will contact hotel reception upon arrival, kindly inform the reception about these papers so that I can collect the documents.
I shall be grateful to you
Sincerely,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
Dear Sir, Hope this letter finds you in best health. I had attended a meeting at you...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...at the end of session. After the tea, I didnt go back to pick those and left the hote...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...el on Thursday i.e. day after tomorrow. I will contact hotel reception upon arriv...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... so that I can collect the documents. I shall be grateful to you Sincerely, ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, may, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52534562212 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46779249282 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3472487139 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5384615385 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33949616691 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100348302198 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058016705627 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173771971401 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848258665727 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.