Write a letter to your local councillor. In your letter :
· Introduce yourself
· Explain what the problem is
· Tell the councillor what you would like to be done
Dear Sir,
I am one of the residences from the APT apartments, Phase 2, Kachin. I am writing this letter to a complaint regarding the garbage thrown by one of the restaurants near the Kelin children’s park.
There are many problems we are facing due to the FRT restaurant is opened a month ago. Firstly, recently they started throwing the trash, plastic and wasted food in the park. Because of this stinking smell is coming, mosquitos and rats are running all over the park. They are entering the apartments as well. We afraid to send children to this park .secondly, they daily playing the music at loud volume till midnight. Thus, we were getting disturbances to sleep and children’s unable to study.
We notified the restaurant management, and there was no action taken by them. So please take vital action on this food court management. Can implement penalty if throwing the waste in the park and restrict the time to play the music with a limited volume.
I am hoping that you would look into this matter and do the needful. I look forward to hearing from you for further notice. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Lima
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| 2020-12-22 | lindaja653 | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am one of the residences from the APT ...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'We're afraid'.
Suggestion: We're afraid
...ey are entering the apartments as well. We afraid to send children to this park .secondly...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... We afraid to send children to this park .secondly, they daily playing the music a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84653465347 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58030990692 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658415841584 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1582827759 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2666666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4666666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083356237874 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308466151364 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446056055714 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456063976858 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443530498353 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.