Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the problem my computer has since this morning. It is not booting.
Yesterday, I had a normal shut down after work. When I tried to switch it on this morning, a blue screen had shown first, followed by that the system got off. I tried to restart the computer a few times, but all went futile. As I am new to the organization, I do not know the standard procedure to deal with this, and hence, I decided to seek your advice.
Because of field trips, I was absent in the office the day before, and I have many reports to prepare. Some important emails also await a reply soon. If not resolved immediately, it would increase the load of my pending assignments.
I shall be grateful if you see that the necessary steps are taken to resolve this time. Kindly advise on the standard procedure to me, so that there is no need to trouble you in the future for such matters.
I request you for earlier action.
Yours faithfully,
Name.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4972972973 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46099744012 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686486486486 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6024045561 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184773017626 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482627723287 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046995019111 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787233881451 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547730488456 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.