Write a letter to your new employer asking him for extension in date of joining.You should write1. why you are writing?2. what are the reasons for delay?3. How long will it take to join ?Start the letter withDear......

Dear Mr. Moc,

I am writing to you to plead an extension in date of my joining to the food department due to unexpected delay of my visa.

I am supposed to start my work as an inspector in food department July 12, Monday. However, I received an email from immigration department noticing me that my work visa is pending at the moment. Therefore, I have to wait a further notice regarding the status of my visa. I am sorry for inconvience caused by my unexpected change. Please accept my apology.

The email from immigration department implied that the next notification concerning will be sent in two weeks. If this matter of my visa went as schedule, I will come to work on August 3rd. I will correspond to you two weeks later immediently after I receive my emile from immigration department. Thanks again for your understanding.

Kind Regards

Jim

Votes
Average: 4.1 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Moc, I am writing to you to plead an extensio...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93579442211 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4028769831 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1818181818 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115490401051 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462199915876 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550063270722 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105502410822 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647296143158 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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