Writing task 1 the pie chart below show units of electricity production by fuel source in australia and france in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Writing task 1 the pie chart below show units of electricity production by fuel source in australia and france in 1980 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Introduction:The grap illustrates how much electricity is producted by fuel source in australia between 1980 and 2000.
Overall, total production of electricity in both countries has experience on upward trend .
In 1980, australia use coal as the main electricity source and reached 50 units, followed by Natural gas and hydro power (about 20 units), oil (just 10 units).
By 2000 in australia ,coal was greatest electricity generation by source in australia and remainder was producted from hydro power (36 units) natural gas and oil (just 2 units)
By contrast,in 1980 coal and natural gas was hugely popular with 25 units. .Although australia haven't used nuclear power to product electricity , in france it seem to use significantly with 15 units.In addition, the electricity made from oil,hydro (>20 units).
Over the course of 20 years,all of electricity by source rose (at many degrees) with the exception of hydro power and natural gas.
In general, the amount of electricity in france is producted more than how much electricity is producted in australia

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... was producted from hydro power 36 units natural gas and oil just 2 units By con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24852071006 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99088363277 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.253612734 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228457118667 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129527687037 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606979425489 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133361440843 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640869494397 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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