You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with food and service

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with food and service

Dear Sir or madam,

I am writing to commend you on the exceptional cuisine and customer services you offered at your restaurant, "Village Square". I and my friends came to your eatery on the 5th of June, 2019. It was actually at your Maryland branch, because of its proximity to our office and the ambient environment which makes it our first choice.

It was actually my best friend 21st birthday and we decided to eat-out to commemorate the special occasion. We were a total of 7 and we both had a good time and we would like to visit your eatery agin.

To be candid, I have not eaten such a delicious meal in a long while. We all decided to eat rice and vegetable soup which turned out to be one of the best meal we have had of recent. The soup was very fresh and vegetable taste crunchy and delicious. In addition to this, we all enjoyed a first class reception and services from well cultured staff, they made sure all our orders were treated promptly and efficiently, the environment was also clean and conducive.

We hope you will continue with this laudable services.

Yours faithfully,

Laura Ashley.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
...iends came to your eatery on the 5th of June, 2019. It was actually at your Maryland branc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, so, well, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.695 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64116924865 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4544635544 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157514015667 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055752918484 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470162210613 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997912373816 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377001475069 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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