You and your colleagues recently attended a foreign language training course organized by your company. Now you want to do some more language training. Write a letter to your manager.
In the letter:
how you and your colleagues felt about the course
why you all want to do more language training
suggest venue and time
Dear Mr. Tompson,
I am writing in connection with the last English training which has taken place recently in our company.
This trial course was extremely interesting for my team as well as for me. Also, the tutor seemed to be high-experienced and all material given was informative and profitable. As you know, my team is going to enter a large international contract provided by the city Government. That is why extending our competence in English would be beneficial in case of this future project. Also, foreign courses in the office as one of the privileges provided by the company may influence positively on the company’s image and attractiveness for potential job-seekers. Thus, all my colleagues and I would really appreciate it if you support our initiative and approve these lessons on a persistent basis. The meeting room in your department tends to be not used on Monday mornings and Friday evenings. So this place and time may be used for this target.
I looking forward to your answer. Thank you kindly in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Sarah Brown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...d time may be used for this target. I looking forward to your answer. Thank y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, so, thus, well, as for, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10674157303 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01858486113 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1420597177 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178630545171 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681062700713 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558032430563 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132489685788 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627472734135 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.