You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the jobExplain why it is important to youSuggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :
Give detail of the job
Explain why it is important to you
Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, I had applied for a job opening of 'Assistant Manager Logistics' in a multi-national company. Initially, a test would be conducted and in later phase interviews are scheduled with human resource department. During, the interview we have to submit two references of people, that have known us for more than a decade. I believe this job can prove to be a catalyst for me.

Let me explain you in detail. As, you are well aware of the reason, due to which I chose the field of logistics for my studies. Moreover, this job will give me an opportunity to understand the global phenomena of supply chain and also, it could be a gateway for me to interact with people from different parts of world. However, in order to achieve this, it is mandatory to provide two references. As, you have known me for more than a decade, so I would like to request you for a letter of reference.

Moreover, in letter of reference you have to provide my strengths, weaknesses, threats and opportunities with other details including number of years we have known each other, etc. Furthermore, I would be grateful to you for this favour.

Yours Sincerely

Alan

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. Recen...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... request you for a letter of reference. Moreover, in letter of reference you hav...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you for this favour. Yours Sincerely Alan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78131113146 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5958816767 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4615384615 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198340350963 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730452184482 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533760645539 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130264480979 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277260907274 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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