Dear Mr. Hudson:
How are you? I hope you are doing well in your new position in the University as
Council Director, congratulations. Definitely you worth it after years of hard
work. It had passed some time since I wrote you, and in this occasion I am
addressing to you because I applied for a job as a tutor in Carmody High School.
This position is very important for my career as a professor because it will
give me plenty experience to my resume. As I commented to you in old letters, I
have worked in this Institute for three years as English teacher, and now I have
this important possibility to grow. I need a reference letter because it is an
important requisite before my final interview.
I would like that if in the letter you include my trustworthiness, enthusiasm
and my team work. It would be nice too, if you could add your opinion about the
different projects I leaded in your class, I think that was a great experience. I
would need the letter in two weeks, if it is possible.
Thank you very much for your time.
Yours sincerely
Maria Gutierrez
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64615384615 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77887210528 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0859518648 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323034454952 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111087440384 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353069065298 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103722713379 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509210787927 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.