Dear Michael,
I am writing to request if you would kindly provide me a reference letter. The job I am applying for is related to the accounting background in the Vancouver. More specifically, I will be appointed as Accounts Manager in Windfall Inc.
Let me explain you the content of the reference letter in more detail. It would be great if you could also incorporate the information about my character apart from my financial skills. I would be pleased if you could tell about my personal behaviour and adaptability in the organisation’s culture. For instance, you could mention about my punctuality, approachability, and amicable nature. In addition, you could describe about my involvement in volunteer social programmes organised by our company.
Could I ask if it would be possible for you to deliver the above-mentioned reference letter by end of this week? As the deadline is approaching, I would need to complete the application by early next week.
I will look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
James Mathew
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2183908046 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25794657423 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5283516918 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356872720518 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130693595336 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858135171402 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204741369823 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524831360355 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.