Global sports tournaments are necessary in this environment of international border uncertainties to relax such kind of issues and also these are taking vital role to make people fall in love with their respective countries. This essay agrees with these statements. In this essay we will discuss how these events helps to strengthen relations among rival countries and what positive effects it may leave on nations' people.
To embark upon, countries which faces continuous tension on on border will play together in such events.These countries will act in a friendly manner throughout the tournament due to stringent rules and regulations of the organising body. India and Pakistan for instance, were passing through irregular phase due to terrorist attacks in India in the few past months.As a result of these, India decided to pull back its nomination from cricket world cup. However, being an international tournament, there are rules and regulations which ought to abide by all the participants countries. Hence, now both the nations will play the tournament which will undoubtedly make the relationship strongest among these country.
To country, participants in tournaments of global level will also boast the love and affection of people towards their country. Usually, people come together during these events to enjoy the time. The level of patriotism during world cup or olympics among people is at its peak. There are less curse to nation and more support. For instance, during fifa world cup, people of countries such as England or Brazil become friendly and have lots of fun while watching matches. Few places such as clubs or restaurants arrange special arrangements during such events for better bonding among people.
To conclude, famous tournaments such as football world cup or olympics will boost the relationships between nations and it will also help better trade relationships between countries in near future. There is a need of promoting such events to keep safety and peace in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29906542056 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76381756141 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548286604361 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4229779661 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112581857444 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440616933505 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352898303052 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753026881617 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340259820416 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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