You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/ her when you think you can start.
Dear Mr John,
Kindly I am writing you to enquire about the availability of postponing the start date of my new job in the company.
First, I had a severe pain in my lower back since the last interview I made with you. So I went to the doctor to check on my back and he said that there is a cartilage moved from the spinal cord and pressuring on the nerves, also he asked me to make a surgery on the 12th of December. Further from this the doctor told me that I have to stay in the hospital for 2 weeks after the surgery.
Would you mind delaying the start date to be on the 1st of January?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Please feel free to contact me anytime.
Yours sincerely,
Tarek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr John, Kindly I am writing you to enquire about...
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...tart date of my new job in the company. First, I had a severe pain in my lower b...
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Suggestion: Further,
...make a surgery on the 12th of December. Further from this the doctor told me that I hav...
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...hospital for 2 weeks after the surgery. Would you mind delaying the start date t...
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...start date to be on the 1st of January? I look forward to hearing from you. P...
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... I look forward to hearing from you. Please feel free to contact me anytime. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Please feel free to contact me anytime. Yours sincerely, Tarek
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ontact me anytime. Yours sincerely, Tarek
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 572.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17518248175 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25713920563 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642335766423 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9168405409 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238515837864 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102438510616 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762085786439 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122299200813 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790591758832 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.