• You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter•Explain your situation•Describe your problems•Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir,
I am penning down this letter to request an extension on my joining by a week as I would not be able to join next week. Let me briefly explain.
To elucidate since I work as a project lead and handle many critical projects for my existing employer therefore due to my short notice period there is a delay in the handover process. The person I need to transfer my work is travelling for work and will only be back by the end of this week. Hence my existing employer has requested me to stay for an additional week so that the transition and handover process is carried out smoothly. Although I can understand that you were expecting me to onboard by next week however I would need an additional week to close the handover process as mentioned above.
Lastly, I would be able to join by the first week of May as I would have closed all pending matters with my existing employer.
I hope you will approve of the above request.
Yours sincerely
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...l only be back by the end of this week. Hence my existing employer has requested me t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, hence, however, lastly, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44943820225 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47731788453 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5962961772 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169505405851 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804222108067 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572033371038 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106872197265 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390049732897 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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