You are going to work in another city for a year. A friend who lives there offered to help you find a place to live. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Express your gratitude to him/her.
– Describe the area that you want to live in.
– Explain what type of accommodation you are looking for.
Hi Emeka,
Thanks for offering to assist me in finding a house in Victoria Island. When this transfer came, I felt miserable and needed someone who lives within the city and understands it very well to guide me. You came like an angel you have always been, and proposed to take this burden off me completely. I am indeed very grateful to you.
My new office is at 72 Ademola Street and I would love to live within a walking distance of twenty minutes from this address. Also, I would love areas with good electricity and water supply, and having made my research, Zenith Bank Road and Kings Street fit these requirements.
In addition, I have had experience living in a compound with two many tenants and would want that no more. My preference is for an apartment with no more than six flats within the compound. The building must have adequate security and will be safety compliant too. The apartment should have two or three bedroom with two exit doors - one in the kitchen and another in the living room. I am also constrained by budget and will love something within two million naira, inclusive of all charges.
Emi, once again, thank you for this act of true friendship and please, contact me once you go for inspection so we can discuss. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours friend,
Chinedu.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: TO_TOO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ad experience living in a compound with two many tenants and would want that no mor...
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Line 7, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng room. I am also constrained by budget and will love something within two milli...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241379310345 0.220444632235 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.145593869732 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0344827586207 0.0606518309736 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536398467433 0.0506257000042 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0842911877395 0.118615021944 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114942528736 0.107062808482 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0383141762452 0.041066498444 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41104295115 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229885057471 0.0385302599488 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0766283524904 0.0714148451538 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0306513409962 0.0191574576366 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00766283524904 0.00930345855455 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1321.0 1141.60824742 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.134020619 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62127659574 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310638297872 0.284621296913 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208510638298 0.211203875043 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136170212766 0.133321485273 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0765957446809 0.0843313296314 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41104295115 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672340425532 0.622163163488 108% => OK
Word variations: 77.7804514815 62.8969750728 124% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7857142857 16.4300151701 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.528492577 44.7399317507 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 90.9928171075 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.4300151701 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.357142857143 0.613754768223 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 37.6367781155 37.5504026743 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.39189189189 1.13073093955 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305302100049 0.331212695627 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0999608194513 0.0927372745006 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0616886080225 0.0736520305886 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544413098352 0.579516596996 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153591853946 0.180689518051 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11438098261 0.122183219658 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747075255429 0.0765303033291 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.121450643561 0.211926503985 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0553171304867 0.0737400523855 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179960459267 0.203819188451 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961182468143 0.067151250289 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.