You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise froma new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of theUniversity. In your letter,Complain about the situationSay why thi

Dear sir or Madam,

I am the residence at new campus area. There is a canteen in here which is quite convenient for us. The attention that I bring to you is that business operates to midnight remaining enoumous noise. I have heard a lot of noise ever since, such as loud music and shouting talk, terribly high levels sound at night.

People being bothered it for such long time so I am on behalf of them to deal with the restaurant owner to let him understand that most people cannnot have good sleep with the noise, and some have to study at late night because they have to work during the daytime. After twice discussions, he rejucted to change anything without any explanation.

I therefore write this letter to ask you to negociate with him, reduce the noise, especially after 10PM, or switch the location to the entrance of the campus, which I know there is a space suitable for canteen also far away from the residencial area.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Joe

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67039106145 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41080710275 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687150837989 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.2610056493 44.8134815571 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259545584992 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816630904502 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474508619935 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131762955424 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431781219344 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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